Chuck Wendig’s latest Flash Fiction Challenge: choose 4 items* from ten random objects and include them in your story. 1000 words is the aim. This is also my 100th post!
Strange things happen in the bedroom of the dead. I’ve heard bagpipes in the middle of the night when there is no one else around. I’ve smelled gunpowder that faded like the mist that rises and falls without warning. I’ve seen the trinkets people leave behind disappear and reappear. I take care not to touch anything. Even the jewelry stays until the rain washes it away or rusts it or the wind takes it. There was a service for an officer and someone left his badge on the stone. I left it where it was, shining on the headstone in the setting sun. I never know what the families think when they come back to visit and things are gone. Maybe they think their loved ones retrieved their little treasures. Maybe they curse the groundskeepers. That’s what Momma said before she ran off: that the living–not the dead–ruined us. But Dad’s family owned this plot of land for centuries and he wasn’t leaving. You’d think living around death for your whole life—playing knights and cowboys among the mossy gravestones and the crumbling mausoleums–would make it all easier. Then, I buried Dad; and I finally learned why he didn’t leave.
He wasn’t a pack-rat like I am, but there was enough clutter around to keep me busy, to keep me from noticing the silence. In the process of boxing up his stuff, I found an envelope on his desk. It sat on the welter of tangled rubber bands, stray papers and yellowed receipts. The old iron horseshoe he used as a paperweight held it down. It had my name on the front. I sat down in Dad’s chair and opened it with his favorite letter-opener, the iron horseshoe on my knee. I could feel the cold, familiar weight of it through my jeans. I remembered what he always said about horseshoes and luck and smiled as I pulled out the letter and read Dad’s spidery handwriting.
I guess there are people out there who seek out destiny—for a sign that their life has a path laid out to greatness. I never thought about it. I would tend the dead until they turned into bones—until I joined their ranks. Ashes to ashes, dust to dust. I never knew Dad to be much of a storyteller, but, in that letter, he told of the early days when the world was still trembling from creation and drawing its first breaths, no need for us in that verdant beginning. Only after death came into the world did we become necessary. I’m sure you’ve heard the myth about Charon, the ferryman who takes the souls of the dead across the river Styx in his little boat. Same general idea, but without the boat. Now, we were just the Watchers, the Keepers. He left me a set of keys and a big silver ring with an emerald in it—the tools of a new Keeper. I thought it was Dad playing a final practical joke, albeit an odd one. I put the ring on my finger and the keys in a drawer.
Almost a year later, I watched a hearse pull out of the gates from the cottage window. The cottage is set back from the road, where the oldest stones and tombs are. Something caught my attention—I knew this part of the cemetery like the back of my hand. Leaning against a wind and rain-scoured stone was a guitar. No case, nothing. The pale wood on the body was shiny, freshly polished and I thought I caught a whiff of cigarette smoke. I looked around—I knew better than anybody that this was a great place to find some solitude. I called out, but no one answered. There was the threat of rain in the low clouds and the wind was picking up. I walked over to retrieve the guitar. The wood was silky smooth when it met my fingers; the strings looked brand new.
I carried it inside and laid it on the table to take a better look. There was a marking on the neck under the strings—carved into the wood. I looked down at the ring on my index finger—I always felt a little silly wearing it–and realized it was the same funny symbol carved into the silver band. It always puzzled me–a three-pronged trident and some kind of flower. I stood very still, feeling like icy snakes were wriggling under my skin and in the pit of my belly. I reached out to pick up the instrument, not sure why my fingers trembled. The wood felt warm in my hands, like it had been sitting in the sunlight for hours. I propped one foot on a chair and rested it on my knee, arranging my fingers on the neck and giving the strings a gentle strum. Perfectly tuned. The snakes in my belly writhed along with the notes hanging in the air. It seemed to shimmer around me, like a mirage. I hadn’t played in years, but it seemed like yesterday.
“You know, the last time someone played an instrument for me there was a wager,” the voice behind me held repressed laughter. “You know the song, I’m sure. Of course, Johnny got it all wrong, can’t blame Mr. Daniels for that.”
I was afraid to turn around, the strings beneath my fingers hummed with every word, thrumming like my heartbeat.
“I hope you like it—you’re the first musical Keeper in centuries.”
I turned then to look at the strange man. He looked young—no older than me–with fair skin and hair. I almost would have wondered if he was an albino if I hadn’t see the eyes; I swear they were black. My mouth felt dry and I didn’t know if I imagined the scent of sulfur.
“You can play safely, you know. I prefer the fiddle,” he smiled and I saw that his teeth were black, too.
He waved a long, skeletal hand at the guitar.
“Besides, I already own your soul.”
*I chose: a police officer’s badge, an unopened envelope, an iron horseshoe and a dead man’s guitar
24 thoughts on “The Groundskeeper”
WOOOOO! Congratulations on the 100th post!
Thank you! So exciting! I can’t believe it’s been that many
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100th post and excellent writing. 🙂
Congratulations on your 100th post! This was a great story! I forgot all about the items I was looking for, I just lost myself in the story. Very well done!
Thanks so much Jessica! I’m glad you liked it. I tried not to force the story around be objects—it was tough!
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oh man, I LOVE this song!!!!!
This was an excellent story. I, like some of the other readers, lost touch with the prompt and just travelled through the story you wove. Greta piece, Wanderer!
I, unfortunately, got too ambitious with my story, and for the first time, I just couldn’t get it down to size. I posted it on my site but I don’t think I’m going to apply any more work to it to whittle it down.
Great work on this though, truly!
Thanks Christopher! I’ll have to go read yours—I’m sure it’s still good despite the word count.
You know, the first part of this story was the first story of yours I read, I think! Congratulations on 100 posts, and here’s to a hundred more like this one!
Thank you! Let’s hope I have 100 more in me!
I’m not sure where this came from, darling, but it seems like you’ve got a whole mythology building in your head here. I’d say more but the exertion might make me fall out of my chair. HEY! 100 posts! Good for you! (I swear, 98 of them have just been in the past month!)
Well, they say the Devil is in the details…
Okay, no more jokes for me today. Thank you! I’m going to tentatively credit some of our emails for bringing some mythology to the front of my mind. In other words, I blame you. In a good way.
I really think they might have been, though…I think I’ve overwhelmed everyone. But better overwhelmed than just whelmed right?
Can you ever just be whelmed? (Is that the new “It’s not dead, it’s pining for the fjords”?)
It’s hard to replace Monty Python…but the issue of over/under/whelmed is hilarious. I’ll take it
Wow! 100 posts and a terrific story. I really liked the mood in this one. You always have a tremendous handle on the tone in your writing. Great use of the random objects too!
Thank you so much! I’m glad you like it.This one was definitely tricky since I tried to choose items that didn’t go together. I need to give your story a look! I didn’t get much reading done yesterday.
Likewise, no real time for reading. Thankfully, Camp NaNo is done so life can get back to normal, haha. I have a few of your posts/ stories I need to catch up on.
As always, a great story. You’re very good at setting mood. Congratulations on your 100th post!
Thank you so much!
This piece flowed really well, and the objects seemed to fit in so naturally. It also had a very well-written eerie feeling throughout it, which I thought you portrayed really well with the comments of your new character at the end. Well done on your 100th post, too – I hope I make it to that many some day 😀
Thank you! I’m glad you thought the objects fit—that was the hardest part for me. I’m sure you can make it to 100! Especially if dead body prompts keep cropping up 🙂
I loved it! I wasn’t sure where we were going until Senor Diablo showed up, and then I got very excited. I do love that song. The entire piece, in content and tone, reminded me somewhat of the Mortal Coils series (which I really recommend): http://www.amazon.com/Mortal-Coils-Eric-Nylund/dp/0765317974/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1375984837&sr=8-1&keywords=mortal+coils
To be honest, I wasn’t even sure where it was going until the ending! My original idea was scrapped by necessity with the 1,000 word challenge.
I’ve heard of the Mortal Coils series—I’ll have to get it on my Kindle, sounds fascinating!